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It's a cover of a book. There are two girls were sitting in sofa. One girl with short hair, and she was wearing short sleeves. She used her left hand to hold her face, and her right hand were holding a side of music book. Her clothes has low collar in black color. She was facing outside, I could see her eyes. On the right side, there was a girl who was backward to us. She had long black hair, with no sleeves long white dress. Her right hand ware a bracelet and she hold another side of the music book. Her right hand hold a bouquet of flowers. They seemed discussed some questions.

The electoral system is the way that votes are translated into seats in parliament or in other area of government. After you vote, you don't have any rights to decided what would be the result. The electron yesterday should be very close, the percentage changes quickly. Maybe people are nervous because they want their dream leader to be the president in the US. Obama and Romney were sitting in the poll and look very nervous as well. They care about it more than us.

How can we get into college and why it's necessary for us to get in good colleges?

 First of all, you have to have enough abilities to get in college, how can you get that? Colleges are important for teenagers because it's the only way to approach the beginning of the successful life during the competitive society. The first step for us is trying hard to get into colleges. Firstly, we should look through the information on college official website to understand the main value and activities from that school, we should pick which schools would fit our personal value and can help us to come true our dream. Secondly, we should look up the requirements, deadlines and prepare the material for applying that college, such as transcript, SAT scores, teacher's recommendations and personal statement essay, etc. At last, we should sent all of our materials before the deadlines. It's the basic steps for getting through college. We are not only doing that, but also we should get a good GPA in high school. Getting in a good college in really important in our life. It's the first step we step in society, and the diploma would be one of the most important measure to know what kind of person and what's your skill. We called that a-stepping-stone to success in Chinese. And also getting in a good college is parents' expectation, maybe for some people it's also parents' hope.
For teenagers, it's our responsibilities to try hard on our school work, and try to get good grade. Getting in a good college is not only for their expectation and dream, but also for ourselves. 

List the steps for your own process analysis writing
1. You have to read the essay carefully first.
2. You have to understand the conflict, the relationship and the main idea.
3. You should know that how to gather people's attention on your analysis essays.
4. You should catch the main point and emotion from the essay.
5. You should organize your logic for making sense to readers
6. You should expound your analysis idea.

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